Alpha Queen

This was kind of disappointing. The editing was disconcerting at times, lots of mistakes, confusion over who was speaking etc. However, honestly, that wasn't even my main objection. The story really fell flat for me. We've been building, badly, towards this EPIC, prophesied WAR, but it all falls flat......more

Good but not great I just finished reading all three books. They were a fast read and I enjoyed them but they won't be going on my favorites list. They are a promising start for a new author though. These books almost seemed a cliffsnotes version of a larger story. Hopefully her future books will be......more

I'm just about done, and i hate Callyn, she is more stupid in this one there the books. Getting kidnapped is her thing and next is stupidness. Her character to me really never grew up enough to me. She says that she was eighteen but to me she sounded like she was only sixteen/seventeen years old. Th......more

Great storyline but horrible editing job So this series was a good one as far as storyline goes. The first 2 books in the series had some minor grammatical errors and forgotten words. Not too bad overall though. This book however was atrocious to read. There were so many issues that I kept asking mys......more

DNF at 60%. I tried. I really tried. It was a good idea plot wise but fell flat on the execution. I made it through the first two books but as soon as book 3 hit the god awful cheesy sex scenes (seriously, if you question your ability to write a good sex scene, you should just not write them at all.......more